November 2017 Challenge: Hunters Fall

[ladiestorm]

Hey XCali!

This is turning out to be a really cool map! In fact, there's only one suggestion I can make.

If you were working in CC3+, I would tell you a light glow effect behind your labels would make them stand out a bit more. But you aren't using cc3+ (I don't think), so all I can tell you is that your black lettering is kind of fading into your bluish grays and your browns... with the exception of the fancy lettering for Hunter's Fall. Now someone with perfect eyesight may not see a difference... but someone like me, who's vision either gives me ghost images, or fade outs (if colors blend too well), I can't really see your labels all that much. With the simple, thin line lettering, they need something to help them stand out, just a bit.

[XCali]

Hi, everyone,

This time, I just tweaked the labels a bit. So, here are two versions of it. I would appreciate if you tell me which one works best.

Now comes the crazy part:

I only have fragments of the next three days to alter anything on this map. I'm leaving for the holidays on Thursday morning and then I'm completely away from my Desktop PC to alter anything from this map. So, any suggestions, if there are any, must come in the next few days.

Thank you so much for the feedback and encouragement so far! I really appreciate it. *High Five*

Here are the two versions:

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HuntersFall_Lables_blue_byOmri.jpeg

HuntersFall_lighter_byOmri.jpeg