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    Guild Journeyer Facebook Connected Derek Von Zarovich's Avatar
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    Map The King's Scepter - One-Page-Dungeon contest entry

    Hello, friends, supporters, Denizens of the Tower, and random internet people.

    This is going to be my entry for this year's One-Page-Dungeon Contest. I should have posted about it a while ago. The deadline is May 1st so there's still time for you guys to participate. You can read about the contest here. https://www.dungeoncontest.com/

    This one is about a royal scepter with which one can claim the right to the kingdom's throne. It's under the sea but you're free to assume it's flooded or not.

    You can download it here https://www.patreon.com/posts/18315804
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    I also crowdsource my work here www.patreon.com/elventower

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    "ornated coffins" should be "ornate coffins"

    Otherwise, the text looks good. The scenario is coherent and ready to be built upon, should the excursion to this ruin prove successful. The layout of the page is very nice. It's a solid entry.

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    hello, thanks for the feedback. I got the same correction on Twitter. I believe you are right but I also found it in the oxford dictionary https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/ornated I'm almost sure it's a dated term, though.
    I'm the owner of www.elventower.com, I spend my time writing DM tips and guides for my website and drawing all kinds of maps to share them online.

    I also crowdsource my work here www.patreon.com/elventower

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