That's looking really great, Thomas

I really like the font, but I can see what you mean about the scrambling of the marks. I hope you can find some kind of solution to that little problem for future maps, but I'm sure that you will.

One of the main names keeps catching at my tired old brain by reminding me too much of a more familiar word. It's Gamarian, which is only two letters different to grammarian (as in old grammar school pupil). I expect that's only a mental jolt for English speaking people, though

There is a legibility problem, but I expect that will resolve itself once you move onto the coloured version.