The original colours were much nicer, I like the blue colour on the water but the land to me is totally clashing and too close in value to the sea. I would also tone down the lines on the sea, maybe just lower the opacity or something, they are nice though just a little busy for me personally.

I do really like that you’re using a red colour for you’re line work, it feels cozy and warm idk I just think it works. Overall it’s still one of my favourite wip’s happening on the forum right now. I love, love, love you’re coast line and mountains I just think It would benefit from more contrast between the land and sea.