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  1. 04-06-2019, 06:09 PM #31
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    Fear not faithful lurkers, I have an update for you.

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    I have started working on the parchment map for Machlud though I am seriously considering a name change for the continent as it doesn't fit so well in my opinion
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  2. 04-15-2019, 10:56 AM #32
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    I've hit something of a crossroads here, I'd love to know which style you all think looks better. Or some combo of the two would work better.

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    I prefer the monochrome version personally, but you might want to make the values of those insert illustrations a bit bolder, currently they are a little too light and difficult to read. Cool sea texture by the way.

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    I'm in agreement with Arsheesh. The monochrome has a solid consistency, and a little more punch to the insets would bring it together well.
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  5. 04-17-2019, 08:29 AM #35
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    Quote Originally Posted by Greason Wolfe View Post
    I'm in agreement with Arsheesh. The monochrome has a solid consistency, and a little more punch to the insets would bring it together well.
    Quote Originally Posted by arsheesh View Post
    I prefer the monochrome version personally, but you might want to make the values of those insert illustrations a bit bolder, currently they are a little too light and difficult to read. Cool sea texture by the way.

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    Thanks for the feedback! The pattern is a seamless pattern I found and edited a little in an attempt to mirror a style Mistybee had on one of her maps.

    Does this looks better for a monochrome version?

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  6. 04-17-2019, 11:28 AM #36
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    I personally like this last one the most out of the three variations. nice work!
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    Yup, that looks much better. Nice layout.

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    Absolutely. Solid work on this.
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  9. 04-22-2019, 11:29 AM #39
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    Thanks for all the positive feedback, I shall now try and label the map without ruining it! I've started work on the labelling but naming all the things takes some time

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    So I think I might finally be done with Haulilwar, land of the setting sun. If anyone can spot any obvious mistakes or has any last suggestions now would be a good time to mention them

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