Thanks for your feedback!
Meanwhile, I started drawing a new travel map. I decided to change the concept a little bit by adding some personal details.
First of all, near the places I visited, I added pages (torn out looked) from my travel diary. I also decided not to draw roads - they are not important on this type of map.
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Secondly, I decided to add a general map showing the whole journey.
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And as usual, I ask, what do you think?