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    @rdanhenry Thanks for that! (embarrassing )

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    looks promising! laughing jungle reminds me of a novel
    Thanks DrWho42, I've not read it, but looks interesting.

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    I’ve enjoyed looking at all the progress pieces. The choice of colour and your layout really add to the ‘atmosphere’ of the mapped area.

    You could try putting in some points of interest like ruins, farms or idols.
    And take your time and enjoy creating your world, the process should be as enjoyable as the endresult
    Thanks Marc, I'm enjoying it, but getting to that point where I want to change everything! I think it's a sign that the end is near.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jim- View Post
    Seeing the progression is really cool. Looks good!

    One suggestion would be the start of the rivers in the mountains could be improved. They look like they mysteriously emerge from the mountains, rather than being fed from a catchment area. A river looks kind of like a root, with lots of branches near the mountains which feed it, and then collecting into a main path that goes downhill.

    I found a pretty cool map of some real-life rivers that demonstrate this quite nicely! (attached)

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    Thanks Jim-! That's an awesome reference. I've tried incorporating this into the new update, I tried adding many more tributaries, but I didn't like the aesthetics of so many, it seemed like the streams were overwhelming the map so reduced it down again, I'll definitely keep this in mind for the next one.

    I think I'm going to call this one done here and move on. It's been a fun map to draw and I've also got a few game ideas out of it around territory control.

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    Nice end result.

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