The Ocean's Mouth Archipelago Map Project

[AlTheArchitect]

Hello Everyone,

I am currently doing this map and I wanted to share the map-making process, I have seen a lot of people doing it on here and it seems to be very beneficial and educational to involve other talented cartographers on personal projects, so, I thought I would give it a go as well.

Any feedback is appreciated and actually welcomed, especially regarding the coast style which I am not entirely sure about!

Bear in mind this map is very early doors and a work in progress.

whirlpool-islands.jpg

[- JO -]

Hello !
Interesting map !
Personaly, I find the coast line a bit broad... maybe thinner would be better ?
Maybe too the waves could be more accentuated, more present ?
And in my opinion, something is missing around those mountains (maybe you planned to draw forest and sand like the one in the right ?)
But you are on a good path here ! It’s promising !!
Keep up the good job !