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Thread: Mar/April '20 Lite Challenge: Sarka Island

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    I think where you have "their names are no incident" you meant "their names are no accident". "Somethings in there!" should be "Something's in there!" Also, "canons" should be "cannons", unless they are throwing some very heavy Bibles at approaching ships.

    I like the island design overall, and the forest is an improvement, but it really doesn't read as jungle to my eyes, more of an English woodland. It certainly doesn't break the map, but you might try to find something a bit more wild and tropical, should you have the time.

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    Thanks for your feedback guys!

    I think where you have "their names are no incident" you meant "their names are no accident". "Somethings in there!" should be "Something's in there!" Also, "canons" should be "cannons", unless they are throwing some very heavy Bibles at approaching ships.
    Thanks for correcting the text! I will change these parts within the next version. Although the idea of Bible throwing defenders is quite intriguing

    I like the island design overall, and the forest is an improvement, but it really doesn't read as jungle to my eyes, more of an English woodland. It certainly doesn't break the map, but you might try to find something a bit more wild and tropical, should you have the time.
    I used some jungle-like brushes already, at least the best I found, but you totally right, it doesn't have a jungle look. I definitly will rework that, if there is time left!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Styescape View Post
    I used some jungle-like brushes already, at least the best I found, but you totally right, it doesn't have a jungle look. I definitly will rework that, if there is time left!
    You have 2 full weeks left, should be plenty of time. Make it great!

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    ok, next WIP: new forest, testing some more details, corrected text

    ### Latest WIP ###

    Sarka_04.jpg


    I also tried some other features (e.g. coastal rocks as TimeToDraw suggested), but couldn't find something which fits in style so far.

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    The new trees give a more jungle look to it

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    Yeah, that's much more junglish.

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    I wholeheartedly agree, much better look for a jungle.
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    More details, reworked some smaller areas

    ### Latest WIP ###
    Sarka_05.jpg

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    I love the fort!

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