I really love the colors on your map. You can just feel the heat and the red rock. You put a lot of effort in all the details! All the tarps in the market section are beautifully done.

I second the outline comment. I don’t think the outlines on the houses are too thick but the hard black color makes them stand out so much more. If you can pick a color just a bit lighter that would make it blend in more with the rest. The ridges could be a bit less thick, adding shadows will give them enough depth I think.