I am with Kisachik on this.

Quote Originally Posted by BluePhoenix175 View Post
if you have any advice or suggestions i am always willing to hear how i can improve my maps.
Hmm, I'd like to make a few notes, maybe see it as brainstorming on how to improve it. For one, though the lineart is decent, BUT it feels like it was still in the concept phase, which would actually make for a good foundation if you used it as a guide to do your main linework from it. Maybe try that next.
Secondly, though cutting off areas to give the paper feel is a good idea, the texture lacking for that doesn't really give it that feel. Maybe try and put parchment texture above it, desaturate it, and put that layer on overlay. (I normally add a duplicate of that on multiply on lower opacity just to get stuff to pop even more.)

Explore a bit with what I said, and remember, even if you don't get it right immediately, it's still experience.
Good luck! And happy mapping!