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    Hehe, besides the inner forest, I feel your text is perfectly fine. I've seen text that dominate the map, taking away from the actual artwork, so this works well.
    Same with the border, borders can sometimes dominate an image. But yours does what it needs to.

    The individual trees are good, though the inner forest can maybe be tweaked to better represent it.

    One possible nitpick I'd make, there is an argument that for this small of a village there might be too many crop farms. But it is debatable.

    Still all in all, a good (evening) map.
    Last edited by XCali; 06-18-2024 at 12:30 PM.

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    Thank you so much for the feedback!

    I'm glad you liked the text and boarders. They have been growing on me a little.

    As for your nitpick, I'm happy you said it cause I love to make believable places so if something feels off, I want to know, so thank you again!

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