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    Map Posting my first map: a fantasy peninsula

    This is my first time posting a map publicly. I used black micron pens on a normal sheet of printer paper. I consider myself a map hobbyist but I have always appreciated these boards so I wanted to contribute.
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    Oooh! Lovely. I do enjoy your line art. Hehe, it's always fun to see someone post a map publicly for the first time.

    Just a quick question, is there a reason why all the names start with small letters? It is a bit odd since it is names.
    And if I want to go into finer details, I'd say the grass tufts are great and all, but a bit over used. Someone once told me, empty space helps a map sometimes. Since if a map it is too busy, it can be distracting. (I often have to tone down stuff on my maps.) In this case, I'd tone down the grass tufts by like a third, and rather add some faint dots to show the contours of the land.

    Anyway, that's nitpicking.
    I like the map. A good forest, cool sea monsters and all!

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    Quote Originally Posted by XCali View Post
    Oooh! Lovely. I do enjoy your line art. Hehe, it's always fun to see someone post a map publicly for the first time.

    Just a quick question, is there a reason why all the names start with small letters? It is a bit odd since it is names.
    And if I want to go into finer details, I'd say the grass tufts are great and all, but a bit over used. Someone once told me, empty space helps a map sometimes. Since if a map it is too busy, it can be distracting. (I often have to tone down stuff on my maps.) In this case, I'd tone down the grass tufts by like a third, and rather add some faint dots to show the contours of the land.

    Anyway, that's nitpicking.
    I like the map. A good forest, cool sea monsters and all!
    The lower case names is purely aesthetic. No reason beyond that. You are right that I have struggled a bit with some of the space on the map. I have experimented with empty space as well but I haven't been really happy with anything yet. I definitely agree there is a problem to solve there.

    Thanks for taking the time to respond.

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    Quote Originally Posted by XCali View Post
    Oooh! Lovely. I do enjoy your line art. Hehe, it's always fun to see someone post a map publicly for the first time.

    Just a quick question, is there a reason why all the names start with small letters? It is a bit odd since it is names.
    And if I want to go into finer details, I'd say the grass tufts are great and all, but a bit over used. Someone once told me, empty space helps a map sometimes. Since if a map it is too busy, it can be distracting. (I often have to tone down stuff on my maps.) In this case, I'd tone down the grass tufts by like a third, and rather add some faint dots to show the contours of the land.

    Anyway, that's nitpicking.
    I like the map. A good forest, cool sea monsters and all!
    Thanks. The lower case is just an aesthetic choice. I liked the way it looked. I appreciate the comment about the grass - that space is something that I have been struggling with. I tried negative space but I didn't like that either but I will give it another try with the faint dots.

    Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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    Very nice, I like your linework and the ground texture detail is great too. I would consider making the mountains larger relative to the trees to make them feel more imposing, though that may harm readability a bit so I can see why you'd choose to do them like that.
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