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    Thanks everyone!

    @Rongar : I agree and I brightened a bit the water labels.
    @Kacey : I've done three other tests today with similar "scratchy" fonts, but it becomes always hard to read for the smallest/curviest labels ... So, I'll keep this one, it's more clean but still calligraphic.
    @Voolf & Mouse : , don't worry, I do intend to finish this one soon, but I can do minor changes and still appreciate suggestions. Plus, both my parents were teachers as well .

    More labels. I failed to place the names of the imperial provinces, so I suppose I'll add a mini-map with them just above the title.
    ### Latest WIP ###
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    Love it, Fonts are OK for me. Just to split hairs : you could may be center "Royaume des Brisants" on the two main islands ? Did you tried a dark outline on white labels on the sea ? just to test
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    Thanks Tenia !

    I did a slight dark halo around the sea labels. And more labels, of course...
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    I haven't commented on this in a while, but I've loved watching it develop because it's simply fantastic. Those forests! The mountains! The texture!

    I think this is probably my new favourite maps of yours. The border is gorgeous too.
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    Thanks a lot ChickPea !

    More labels and a first draft for the mini-map (not sure if it's appropriate since I didn't planned it at first). It obviously need a frame of some sort...
    ### Latest WIP ###
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    Wow, i haven't seen the coloured version before and it looks simply brilliant Ilanthar, truly stunning work! The mini map is great and well readable. I agree without a frame it looks still a bit too much "hanging in the air". Have no good idea atm how to incoorporate it better into the overall layout (maybe giving it a circle shape like the other corner elements?), but i'm sure you'll find a good solution!
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    Bon ! Il démarre quand le Patreon ?

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    By Abu Lafia
    (maybe giving it a circle shape like the other corner elements?
    Actually, that's an excellent idea! Thanks a lot, Abu Lafia !

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    Bon ! Il démarre quand le Patreon ?
    Un ami m'a parlé de Tipeee... Donc je pense que je vais faire les deux. Il faut que je prépare le côté français du coup, mais peut-être que je pourrait démarrer les deux la semaine prochaine .

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    Guillaume Tavernier fait les deux et je pense que Kosmic fait de même. J'ai hâte

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    By Thomrey
    Guillaume Tavernier fait les deux et je pense que Kosmic fait de même. J'ai hâte.
    Cela semble être une bonne option .

    My test with Abu Lafia's idea for the mini map. I will try to put the last labels and to finish it tomorrow.
    ### Latest WIP ###
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