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    Excellent job! It is a very clear and beautiful map. Maybe I would have added a little bit of depth to the coasts and trees but a part from that it's a fantastic black and white map!

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    I really dig this map. The sleek lines are very nice and the mountains have a lovely amount of detail. Great work!

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    Well done and very clean . One thing I think you could improve is the rivers. There are a bit too uniform (or "noodle") and I think a pointy end plus some width variations would make them perfect.
    Other than that, again, a very fine map.

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    Thank you very much everyone! I'll keep everything you said in mind for future maps.

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    A pretty nice map !

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    Lovely work, Matthew. Very clear and beautifully drawn. I could easily see this in the front pages of a novel. Congrats on your first paid commission. That's awesome!
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    Thank you, Thomrey and Chickpea!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    Well done and very clean . One thing I think you could improve is the rivers. There are a bit too uniform (or "noodle") and I think a pointy end plus some width variations would make them perfect.
    Other than that, again, a very fine map.
    Great job so far and congrat on another commission, just wanted to say I was going to comment on the rivers as well, but Ilanthar summed it up already, looking forward seeing this progress.

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    Quote Originally Posted by snodsy View Post
    Great job so far and congrat on another commission, just wanted to say I was going to comment on the rivers as well, but Ilanthar summed it up already, looking forward seeing this progress.
    Thank you, snodsy! The map is actually already done, but I'll keep that in mind for future maps.

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