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    Very nice start KD! One minor nitpick I spotted here and on a previous map (I think), the way you're drawing your trees is kinda asymetric in my eye, which looks a bit odd when applied to all the trees on a map. It's a minor thing, but I really think it would look better with more tree diversity.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    Very nice start KD! One minor nitpick I spotted here and on a previous map (I think), the way you're drawing your trees is kinda asymetric in my eye, which looks a bit odd when applied to all the trees on a map. It's a minor thing, but I really think it would look better with more tree diversity.
    Thanks ilanthar . by diversity you mean diferent shap or diferent variety ??
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    Well, I was thinking of the shapes. But different varieties could also do well !

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    You're off to a fantastic start and I absolutely adore that border!
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    thanks ChickPea, all drawn by hand, so it's not perfect but not so bad for a first time border drawing ...

    i started the Spaceship deck plan
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    I have further the work .. I love it in black and white, I don't know if I'll shaded ...

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    and the Spaceship deck plan ... i'm going to resize it and add in the big empty rectangle !
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    The ship is cool!

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    I scan it for a test witheout shading ...

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    what do you think about it guys ? I need your opinion ...
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    I think it's looking fantastic! I do think it could do with some shadows, though... my only suggestion. Maybe some texturing, if you are going to keep it in black and white... but that's just my 2cent opinion! lol

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    Thanks Ladiestorm .. Sponsor's opinion (yours ) is important to me! I like to discuss with my client while creating the map. I was thinking to add some texture on the roof instead of shades ... maybe some very little dot line where they should be darker .. i have save it to be sure !! so i can try ... but I have to think for not regret ...
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