June 2016 Challenge: <<Havasupai Falls >>

[Ilanthar]

The perspective of the lower area across from the cave is a little weird, I'll fix that.

It looks fine to me.

About the insert, why not try move the title - say on the right bank - and place the insert in its place? Looking forward to the allien thing .

[snodsy]

### Latest WIP ###
Ok, this is basically done, there are some not so obvious petroglyphs hidden somewhere in the map. Eliminated the regional map, didn't like it competing with the map. Comments welcome.

HavasupaFalls4.jpg

[Josiah VE]

This is fantastic! The water looks like you can see straight down to the bottom, it's awesome! And the falls and rapid type thing look great.

Where are the glyphs??

[Ilanthar]

I agree with Josiah, the way you did the waters is subtle and quite magic. I really like your shading too, very important for this kind of map where terrain is the major feature!

[J.Edward]

I like it a lot snodsy. It looks sparse though, text-wise.
I'm not sure if there are any other things that could be labeled but it feels like it needs something more...
Maybe numbers to denote the 3 falls locations, dotted lines to mark trails maybe? idk...
is there no other name data you could add? It doesn't detract from the image you did, just seems like a lot of map and little info is all.

[ThomasR]

It's wonderful ! The colors alone are magnificent. A really immersive map ! Rep-worthy !

[snodsy]

Thanks Thomrey for the rep, appreciate it. Thanks Ilanthar and Josiah for the compliments. JE, thanks for the advice I'll look into it. maybe the pathways out. I still have an overview map I did, just didn't like it yet. I guess some work to do before it's complete this friday. Thanks again for the comments, it helps alot.

[snodsy]

### Latest WIP ###HavasupaFalls5.jpg
Here are some additional labels, glad I did it, learned more about the area. Probably done for the Friday deadline. Thanks for comments along the way, learned of a beautiful place I want to go!

[J.Edward]

I think that looks much mappier now
I've had to do that with Real world maps too.

[Ilanthar]

Even better with those additionnal labels & trails! Great job!