July 2018 Challenge : Somewhere on South Crystalfane Avenue

[fol2dol]

Nice one Robin, very BD-esque ! You're getting real good with procreate. May I ask if you plan on making it more mappy ?

The twilight/dusk effect is good but a bit too vertical, maybe add darker colors in the upper part ?

I'll try to improve the dusk background, thanks for the feedback Tom!
And if I have some time left, I'll try to add a map somewhere

Can I cast my vote already? I'm really loving how this map is going.

Thanks

This is going to tell a great story when it's done fol2dol, really liking where you're going with this.

Thanks Adfor

I like the colors so far - feels like its sunset, and the lights are just starting to come on in the shops.

And I see you drew me panhandling for change!

Nice try Diamond, but you ain't fooling me with your disguise. I know you're spying for the opponent thieve's guild

[Weery]

I love the colours you've used and the shading, too. This is looking really good already f2d

[fol2dol]

I love the colours you've used and the shading, too. This is looking really good already f2d

Thanks Weery!

Here's a little improvement.
Someone has dropped a map on his way out of the cartographer's shop or maybe it felt here from the tower...

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[Bogie]

Hey! You found my map! Actually it is a fake map that I left there on purpose to trick Diamond. Everything is backwards and there are multiple errors and traps not marked. While he is running around in circles following this map, I will make off with the real treasure. Ha!

Great work, love the colors and the "feel" of this one!

[Ilanthar]

I love the color choices and the general idea!
And I do hope that hobo isn't the Maistre Cartographe (or he is not working at all!) .

[fol2dol]

Hey! You found my map! Actually it is a fake map that I left there on purpose to trick Diamond. Everything is backwards and there are multiple errors and traps not marked. While he is running around in circles following this map, I will make off with the real treasure. Ha!

Great work, love the colors and the "feel" of this one!

I knew it when I opened that secret door leading to the treasure room and saw a tiny room with a familiar stench!

I love the color choices and the general idea!
And I do hope that hobo isn't the Maistre Cartographe (or he is not working at all!) .

Merci
And no, he's just a regular hobo (or maybe not...)

Some tiny adjustments, nothing big. I worked on the sky with the new tools from the Procreate update.
I think next step will be inking if I find the time...

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[Adfor]

And no, he's just a regular hobo (or maybe not...)
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A hobo . . with intrigue!

Can't wait to see what you do with the man climbing the tower.

[fol2dol]

A hobo . . with intrigue!

Can't wait to see what you do with the man climbing the tower.

for that little guy... wouldn't it be his map that we see on the ground? did he threw it on purpose 'cause he found the tower or did he lost it? What if there's the map of the tower on the other side?

[Bogie]

Originally Posted by Adfor
A hobo . . with intrigue!
Can't wait to see what you do with the man climbing the tower.
for that little guy... wouldn't it be his map that we see on the ground? did he threw it on purpose 'cause he found the tower or did he lost it? What if there's the map of the tower on the other side?

Aha, you spotted me, and yes I left the trick map on purpose. or did I?

[fol2dol]

I tried to ink the outlines but it wasn't great so I stay with the pencil outline.
I worked on the left side of the street, slowly.

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