April 2020 Challenge: The Great Train Robbery

[Tom Solo]

Amazing map

[snodsy]

###Latest WIP###
Thanks for the comments, I think I'm basically done, critic welcome!
GreatTrainRob6.jpg

[Warlin]

Well done Snodsy. Good choice for your label's font. Some of your animals and charriot need their shadow.
Nice to see you again and your maps also. They have a personnal touch.
Cheers.

[snodsy]

Thanks for noticing that Warlin, I'll add those. Yes it's nice to have some time to spend on maps again. Thanks

[rdanhenry]

Your text has an "it's" for "its" error. Also, "escaped" should be "escape". A "posse" is generally used for those on the side of the law. Indeed, I'm not sure broader usage existed at all in the time of the old west, when Sheriff's still gathered actual posses with enough frequency to need the word. Unless the Sheriff was robbing the train, it would be a "gang". I would also hyphenate "little-used". What you have isn't strictly wrong, but hyphenation avoids any hint of ambiguity that "little" might refer to the size of the pass.

Otherwise, fix those missing shadows and I think you're done. It's looking good.

[snodsy]

April 2020 Challenge
### Latest WIP ###
GreatTrainRob8.jpg

Thanks rdanhenry for the proofing of the copy, appreciate it, never been a strong suite of mine. This is probably the final.

[Levtrona]

The image isnt showing in the overview. Would be such a shame if it is dropping out of the challenge. Edit the WIP Tag right in front of the picture tag.
Great Map.

[snodsy]

Thanks Levtrona for the notice on the thread, also for the rep, appreciate it. Hopefully it shows up now.

[arsheesh]

A fantastic entry Snodsy!

Cheers,
-Arsheesh