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    I like it. The blue is very saturated, but that might be a style choice.
    If i see correctly, your lightsource is coming from the bottom left. I would add some more strong shadows. I look forward to the end result.

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    Thanks! The shadows… yes. I realized that some different choices earlier on would have helped me out here. I'm definitely going to think some more about how I do the shading next time around. The last couple of maps I've done, I've tried to brush them in, but I want to go back to some of the more solid shadows I was doing earlier.

    For better or for worse, I'm going to stop working on this one

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    Of course, feedback is still appreciated. It will help me in the future!

    cheers,
    Meshon

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    Also, a version with a grid, just in case.

    Icebound-Terrace-Grid.jpg

    No, I didn't forget the grid! Sometimes people just like maps without grids, right?


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    This turned out really well. I love those patches of snow around the bottom area. The staircases and the stone walls are really well done too.

    If I had to nitpick over one thing, I think it would be the title. I feel it blends too well. When I zoom in on it, and I'm not seeing much else in my browser window, it looks all right. But when I zoom out to look at the whole map, I feel it gets lost a little and needs a little to boost to stand out against the background. Just my tuppence.
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    @ChickPea, your tuppence is worth a shilling, no, a crown even. I had some trouble with that title but I was short on time and gave up too early. Sadly it was an afterthought and could have used a better treatment. I may even take another look at it before I shelve this one.

    Thanks for the comments!

    cheers,
    Meshon

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    I would love to see what the "story" behind this place is. Like what is in each room and what race/species created this awesome place. It is definitely a really cool map I would love to see about running in my campaign with your permission.

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