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only thing to me is that most of the buildings look completely flat, without even the slightest shadow to give them depth.
The fire does look better. I like the grass you added and the tents. Given the size of the city, it's seems there should be more things littering the streets. wagons, carts, market stands, etc. It does look a little too clean.
Looks Great!!
only thing to me is that most of the buildings look completely flat, without even the slightest shadow to give them depth.
"When I use a word," Humpty Dumpty said in a rather scornful tone," it means just what I choose it to mean -- neither more nor less."
"The question is," said Alice, "whether you can make words mean so many things."
"The question is," said Humpty Dumpty, "which is to be master -- that's all."
-Lewis Carrol: Through the Looking Glass
I think your right.. I will litter it up a bit.Originally Posted by dragonwolf
well, they do have shadows.... but you have to remember, its night, with lots of black smoke, so no ambiant light... but i will work some of the flatnessLooks Great!!
only thing to me is that most of the buildings look completely flat, without even the slightest shadow to give them depth.
yea i realize that, but their should technically be shadows created by the light of the fires
"When I use a word," Humpty Dumpty said in a rather scornful tone," it means just what I choose it to mean -- neither more nor less."
"The question is," said Alice, "whether you can make words mean so many things."
"The question is," said Humpty Dumpty, "which is to be master -- that's all."
-Lewis Carrol: Through the Looking Glass
Added some litter, carts, dirt. Emphasized roof top breaks and such.
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soooo... by the middle of the map, is it safe to assume they found the arsonist?
great piece by the way!
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Well, there were in fact multiple arsonists. By the middle of the map, it is safe to assume they found, the governor.
HA! Ha! ha! HA!
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All of this month's entries are of a really high standard, but this one, I think is one of my favourites. Great work, Lord.
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