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Thread: November/December 2015 Challenge: The Island of Gnoff

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    Hi Ric, this is looking just great!

    Minor details ... there needs to be rock blocking the passage just a little bit beyond Brog's Lair, so they have to turn around and go back, eventually to find the town. I love the drawings of Brog and the gargoyle in the corners!

    The drowned castle and the twin waterfalls look perfect now. If it's possible at that scale to put a rocky "face" on that cliff, so the waterfalls look like they are coming from the eyes, that would be super. It is, after all, the Lake of Tears

    Somewhere in the palace we need the stairs to heaven, but that might be really nice to show in the side view instead of the plan view, so sure, go for that I like it

    The gardens and orchards are fabulous!!

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    This is coming along really nicely Snodsy. I particularly like the illustrations, very charming.

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    This is looking fantstic so far snodsy! Great job. The terrain and the ruins are very appealing and the coloring is lovely (as usual).

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    It's looking good so far Snodsy. The layout is nice too.

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    Love it, especially the little gargoyle dude in the corner! You have my admiration for all the line art on the cliffs.
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    ### Latest WIP ### Thanks for the comments. Played with Title panel, vine border, and colors. Drew the section view. Summarized Chick's text. Gnopf10.jpg

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    Looking absolutely awesome!

    This is an adventure on my D+D world, written at least 25 years ago, and Ric has worked from the descriptions written in the adventure. I recently restarted this world with a new group of players, so when they get to Gnopf, this will be a fabulous map for them to have. In fact, I may even print it large and frame it

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    Repeating what everyone else has said - this is looking great and the location is also very interesting (the palace and sunken castle especially). However I don't think the bevel/emboss/stroke on the border looks very good. I don't think it works and I think it'd look better if you did any shadows and highlights by hand.

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    This is excellent.
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    Brog's tail was a nice touch

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