Unfinished B&W Regional Map for a novel

[Kellerica]

Looks pretty nice so far, a pity the client seems to have dropped out for now...

I'll have to second Ilanthar's earlier comment on the coastlines and the sea maybe needing some gray color to it. On the busier areas with smaller islands with forests and mountains hugging the coastline, my eyes have serious trouble making sense of where the land ends and ocean begins.

[Warlin]

Thanks Kelleri. You're right about the sea. I use some grey to color it as Thomas, Ilanthar have comment before. Hope it'll be more lisible. The final map is published in the finishep map folder.
Cheers.

[JonathanCR]

Beautiful! The mountains and dunes are great, and I especially like the little cultivated fields.

[tainotim]

Very nice map Warlin. To bad about the client. Hopefully you got paid for the work you did anyway.

Regarding feedback perhaps you could have slightly more variation in the mountaints. I think they are great, but at times they look slightly to similar.

Cheers,
Karl