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    Very nice! I love the way it gives the impression you're flying over it. It has kind of a curvy horizon feel.
    I agree with other about the mountains.

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    The French Critics Crew !

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    Alright alright! You guys are right! Damn you for making me see that 😁.

    I've taken a step back and yes, the ridges are too regular. As a matter of fact, I've already started a rework, which I'll post in a minute.

    Sheesh, with all your trying to make me perform better 😁. Those French guys huh? 😉
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    Anything for our belgian cousins, after all, we're all gauls

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    okay, this must have been the longest minute in the history of "I'll do it in a minute", but that's because I suddenly decided - out of nowhere - to shade some of the new linework right away. So here you have it. Is this at all better?

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    Update! Some more renewed mountains (feedback requested!), a border and a name frame!

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    Your mountains got way more personality this way and I'm a sucker for greek friezes so kudos (greek pun intended) for that !

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    Really nice. I'm admirative of the way you manage the river system with the mountains one. They are closely integrated and i'm carefully taking notes . Waiting for your next update.

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    I like it even better, nice job! The title is quite big and over the land but I suppose the main focus is on the central peninsula and surrounding islands? Nice frame.

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    Nice work and colors too. My only critique would be that the mountain line work seems a little thick, and with the shadowed area starts to muddy up some. Depending on the output size it may or may not be an issue. Nice job, looking forward to seeing this develop.

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