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Thread: April 2017 Challenge: The Eastern Lands of Lyranth

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    Thanks for the feedback guys! Labels and places were the main things I hoped to add. I tried some little symbols but they didn't work so the red dots you suggested Mouse may be just the ticket!

    I'll give it a shot and see how it goes. I don't know why I didn't try just adding the labels already.

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    It looks great Greg! The inset are lovely. I especially like the 'Bay of Tears' one. I agree with the others though, some labels would be great, though I wouldn't go overboard with it! This empty kind of map has a sort of elegance to it (:

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    Boy, this map is just GORGEOUS! Perfect palette choices.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DanielHasenbos View Post
    It looks great Greg! The inset are lovely. I especially like the 'Bay of Tears' one. I agree with the others though, some labels would be great, though I wouldn't go overboard with it! This empty kind of map has a sort of elegance to it (:
    Thanks, Dan, and I definitely don't want to do too much with the labels either so hopefully this new update will help.

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    Boy, this map is just GORGEOUS! Perfect palette choices.
    Thanks, WarBeer, pleased you like it so much!

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    That's beautiful Greg

    The glow on the labels is just a bit thick and pale for my taste, but that really is just a matter of taste

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mouse View Post
    That's beautiful Greg

    The glow on the labels is just a bit thick and pale for my taste, but that really is just a matter of taste
    Thanks, Mouse, and I agree! I originally had a thicker font so it didn't look so bad, but here's a new version.

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    This is looking great. It is a little bare around the middle area, and I can't quite decide whether I'd like to see more there or not. The insets are fantastic! I love the lighthouse one.
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    Wow! I've missed all this progress somehow.
    I zoomed in to the mountain inset, and was going to say "I especially like the inset with the mountains." Then I scrolled down and thought, "Ooh, and the lighthouse. Oh, the castles good too! Oh my, lovely port and ships." They all look great.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChickPea View Post
    This is looking great. It is a little bare around the middle area, and I can't quite decide whether I'd like to see more there or not. The insets are fantastic! I love the lighthouse one.
    Thanks, ChickPea! Also, I know what you mean about the middle. I don't have time now, but perhaps I'll try just putting in a few hills around that area just to balance the emptiness a tad.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Josiah VE View Post
    Wow! I've missed all this progress somehow.
    I zoomed in to the mountain inset, and was going to say "I especially like the inset with the mountains." Then I scrolled down and thought, "Ooh, and the lighthouse. Oh, the castles good too! Oh my, lovely port and ships." They all look great.
    Haha, thanks Josiah!

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