Much much much much better...fits in with the drawn style of the rest of the map. Maybe you could find a good hand-writing font too (shrug) or maybe that might be overkill...I can't seem to visualize at the moment.
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Gandwarf has fallen into shadow...
*mutters something about 4e being too videogamey*
That aside though, I'm liking your artwork.
So, for giggles here is my CC3 mapped adventure I put my players through earlier last year. It becomes very....rough at the end of the adventure, but hey. Was fun writing it.
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That is a very nice final product.
Of course, I feel like I should shoot for this when create my own adventures now. So thanks for that
It does look like one of those supplements you would buy in the gameshop too.
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Wouldn't take much polishing to make that publishable. If I was still running campaigns, I'd buy it.
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