Ersïa

[Warlin]

Two things jump out at the eyes: for your southern continent, the reliefs are equidistant from the two shores, while one might expect more a distribution such as South America, on one edge or the other of the continent. In the middle part of the map, there is this big land mass which I might see coming up to the upper land, in this case the relief should be turned by 90°. But all this critics are without meaning if you have in mind another plate tectonic. I think It depends greatly from the viewer point.

[arsheesh]

Those mountain ranges look amazingly realistic Ilanthar, as do the land formations. Very nice work on this. Looking forward to seeing the finished piece.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Ilanthar]

By Warlin
But all this critics are without meaning if you have in mind another plate tectonic. I think It depends greatly from the viewer point.

I don't have any plate tectonic in mind . Thanks for your view, I've changed things accordingly (and to my liking), and I think it's actually better. A lot of other small corrections...

Thanks a lot Arsheesh, that's the advantage of working from real data .

And except if you spotted a major catastrophy, I think the topography is done. Now, I'm gonna redo more precisely the coloring.
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[SteffenBrand]

I'd drop the thickness on the outline nearly by half and I'd try a very dark blue. After all is done and you need more contrast, try to collapse everything on an additional layer, set on Overlay with 20-30% opacity with a high-pass filter on about 4px.

Other than that I think you are off on a good map here, I like the shapes a lot! =)
Best wishes, Steffen

[Ilanthar]

Thanks Steffen !

By SteffenBrand
I'd drop the thickness on the outline nearly by half and I'd try a very dark blue. After all is done and you need more contrast, try to collapse everything on an additional layer, set on Overlay with 20-30% opacity with a high-pass filter on about 4px.

I toned down the coastline and turned it dark blue. Better indeed. Sadly, I don't fully understand the rest of your advice : I suppose that a "high-pass filter" is a photoshop filter?

Some new test about the seas and land colors. Not much since I've reworked my conlang and named the 7 continents, the 6 oceans and the 116 countries...
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[SteffenBrand]

The rest was Photoshop-specific stuff, indeed. To show you what I mean I just did it with 50% opacity, more than I would recommend and re-upped your map. I'd also - as stated above - drop the thickness of the outline.

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Maybe you can include a small relief-effect combined with a soft shadow opposed to the lights direction to emphasize the coast a bit more to differentiate the land a bit more from the water. It has been done here, for example (cropped and blank):

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Btw, labelling can be hell... my condolences. Did you came up with all names or do you had them already? Just out of interest.

Best wishes,
Steffen

[Ilanthar]

Hum, I tried your suggestions (I think). Is it better? I fear the land effect might be too strong an and the outline too pixellated... or that's just me?

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By Steffen Brand
Btw, labelling can be hell... my condolences. Did you came up with all names or do you had them already? Just out of interest.

Hopefully, it's a world map (so, not so many mountains/rivers/details names...). I had to find the names and it was a long process since I had to develop my conlang dictionary in the same time. I think I've found the most part of the labels for this map, though.

[SteffenBrand]

Hey! I think it is way better! I only get the feeling of being too pixelated with the smalles islands, did you use outline settings on the outside or the middle? I think you used middle, you can try outside perhaps. =) Glad you have everything you need regarding labels. I recently bought 'The art of language invention', but haven't had the time to conlang along ^^

[Voolf]

This map looks so realistic, i love it Ilanthar.
Btw, is it made in PS ?

[Ilanthar]

@SteffenBrand : I don't have a middle outline option . It's both outside&inside, but at size x2 reduced to the final size to get something thinner. I played a bit with the new and the old version... and I hope it's better.
Concerning the conlang, I'm really glad of what I've done. Grammar, general rules and decisions are quite pleasant... the real problem is to build a dictionnary. Even if I have done a conlang which makes it easier (a lot of words are built from a a basis of "key words").

@Voolf : thanks! I'm not using PS. For this one, everything is made with my good old Paint Shop Pro 7.
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