January 2014 Entry - Treasures of Lohan

[Carbus]

Started working on the board itself.
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[Schwarzkreuz]

Truely a very nice map, I only feel a bit at odds on the forests, the style dont matchup for me.

[- Max -]

I kinda agree with Sk here, maybe it's because of the blurryness of the forests compared to the outlining work of mountains , rivers and locations?
Also a few nitpicks on details that caught my eyes:
- Overlapping : you have a few overlaps here and there, you might want to check them and fix them. Most important are : cliffs overlpapping the town column 4 line 8, mountain overlaps town colummn 14 line 3, terrain outlines overlaps river column 11 line 3.
- Rivers mouths : they doesn't look very clean, I would erase sticking out parts.

[Carbus]

Almost there.

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[Jalyha]

You fixed the farm roofs!

This is looking amazing. And I like seeing it all together, I'm really getting a feel for how to play!

[arsheesh]

This is turning out to be a great entry!

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Carbus]

You fixed the farm roofs!

This is looking amazing. And I like seeing it all together, I'm really getting a feel for how to play!

Yeah! They really felt weird haha I think its better now! Im creating the Manual now, with rules and everything!

Thanks @arsheesh!

[Carbus]

Link to the rules:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/i0lx57ly79...astreasure.pdf

[Jalyha]

Looks fantastic! And the game sounds way fun just a couple of things I noticed... nitpicky typos/grammar/spelling stuff... I don't know if you care but...

1) in section 2.1:

"Everyone starts at the city of Lohan and must travel through the

2.2 Player turn"

Think you missed something there

2) I think you should include a rule for determining who goes first. People can be REALLY immature. Highest dice roll, maybe?

3) Bodyguard card description: "reffunded" = "refunded".

4) Section 4: "where he didn't hid the treasure" = "where he didn't hide the treasure"

(Is the Longitude card supposed to have 2 "o's"?)

[Carbus]

Finished!

Rules: https://www.dropbox.com/s/i0lx57ly79...astreasure.pdf
(Big thanks to Jalyha for the grammar erros!)

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