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    Very nice improvements! I love the tracks on the road, especially the ones that indicates the off road leaving.

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    Thanks Ilanthar & ChickPea.

    Now I have added the horses and numerous other critters and small objects. Some are obvious, some are not.
    I think the only thing left to do is make a nice frame for it. ( ya never know for sure )

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    Awwwwesome!! I absolutely love this map, has a great mood to it. One thing I think would improve it a lot is by making the rest of the map darker, and only the caravan camp glowing, it would give a better mood I think. More like a dark mysterious, dangerous forest, if you're going for that. If not it's fine.

    And maybe some blend between the path and the ground? Just my thoughts.

    Though I understand about not having animals in a game map, I love them in this.

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    Thanks Josiah, I envisioned this map as being set at dusk, a bit before sunset, so not completely dark. But I did increase the darkness of the woods by 15% and I do like the look.
    I already blended the edge of the road a bit, you should see the original. I probably should have used a wider blend, if I have time I will try to blend it some more.

    This is the original the way it comes out of DundJinni. Caravan_Campsite2_bg.jpg

    And this is after a lot of Photoshop post production.
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    What would we do without photoshop post production..

    If it's dusk that makes sense, but even the small amount you darkened it I like a lot.

    As for the road, it really isn't bad at all, I would just think even if it's an established road it does look as if it is dirt and would spread around a little bit, unless it is really well kept. Regardless, those are very minor things and it still looks awesome.

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    yep. It does look awesome. Great job Bogie!

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    Nice Map! I love the details - the animals are great!

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    Thanks everyone! I appreciate the tips and ideas. I added a border and now I think I am done.

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    This is awesome Bogie. I love the new border you put on it! The whole piece is just amazing!

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    Great stuff. Very inspirational!

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