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    I quite like the orrery, the crocs, the tents, the outbuildings, the... You get the idea

    Regarding your idea of doing it more cartoony, without a texture though, I think I prefer the artsy-er feel of having a texture. But that is just my preference. See what other folks say too


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    I like it, & the orrery came out good.
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    Thanks man! And just btw, I am basing the Orrery on Pathfinder's solar system, but I can always figure a more general look out to make it rules neutral.

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    The crocodiles are amazing, maybe you could provide them as an asset the GM can move though for the gameplay purposes. Happy birthday.
    Aww, thank you. I appreciate it. Also, that is a very good idea! I'll try to keep it in mind.

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    I quite like the orrery, the crocs, the tents, the outbuildings, the... You get the idea

    Regarding your idea of doing it more cartoony, without a texture though, I think I prefer the artsy-er feel of having a texture. But that is just my preference. See what other folks say too
    Hehe, I'm glad you like it. I'm trying something a bit different. And I'll be sure to keep an eye on if I should reveal the texture layer again. For now I feel that every asset has a more cartoony feel, so it kinda felt the texture was overpowering, but I'll check and our fellow cartographers can ponder about it too.
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    Default Lily Pads

    So for this one, I played with making a lily pad asset that would work for the map. That, and I placed my flooring. I did try something with giving them color regions, but I'd like your feedback on that.

    Anyhoo, hope you enjoy.

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    I like the lily pads, the details are looking good.

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    The lily pads look great! That is for sure. As to the flooring, the coloration looks slightly odd to my eye, but if this is intended to be a battle map (or something similar for a tabeltop game), then I think the colors are perfect. The GM can surely think of all kinds of uses for them, and it gives some variety to the piece.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    I like the lily pads, the details are looking good.
    Thanks! After the challenge, I'll make the lily pad set available as an asset.

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    The lily pads look great! That is for sure. As to the flooring, the coloration looks slightly odd to my eye, but if this is intended to be a battle map (or something similar for a tabeltop game), then I think the colors are perfect. The GM can surely think of all kinds of uses for them, and it gives some variety to the piece.
    I appreciate the feedback. And it is intended as an Encounter map/battle map. I want to get the coloration right for use in that regard, so any alteration feedback is appreciated.

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    Help To be or not to be?

    I have to admit, I'm a bit stumped. I spent several hours to do a small swamp plant or small mangrove set for the map. But, now I am unsure if it fits on the map. How do you all feel about it?

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    2: With?
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    looks great with the trees.

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    I quite like it with the trees. Without them, I sort of lose the sense of space to the rest of the image, but they give a feel for what else is around the orrery, and are certainly the type of thing players in a game would want to make use of, and have a sense for. In short, good job adding 'em!


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    I'll second the plants. I'm pretty much a believer in map scatters.

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