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Thread: Jan / Feb 2016 Lite Challenge: The Tomb of Vrena and the Forgotten Poet

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    Next update, the cliff. I hope the window looks better. Comments welcome, but please be kind, that cliff was started over several times before I finally got something I dare to show.

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    That leaves two sarcophagi and the stream to go. Whew.

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    The window looks good to me now. Good job tackling the difficult cliff face. It's always tough to get started on drawing rocky stuff.
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    I think I've figured out what the cliff needs ... it needs more grunge Funny how you don't see that until you've posted the map, and then suddenly it becomes obvious

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    Chick, the cliff looks awesome! Can't wait to see it with more grunge but the line work is on point.


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    The cliff, the stairs, the window,,Perfect!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    The cliff, the stairs, the window,,Perfect!
    Quote Originally Posted by saria View Post
    Chick, the cliff looks awesome! Can't wait to see it with more grunge but the line work is on point.
    Thank you both! "Perfect" might be a little strong, but I sure appreciate the sentiment

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    I think I've fixed some of the things that people have pointed out to me. I also wanted to do more to separate/distinguish the interior of the caves (greyscale) and the outside world (color), and it did make sense for the overall rock to have a reddish tint, so I added that everywhere except inside the caves where I want to keep it black and white.

    A new texture for the lawn and a few bushes. And grunge everywhere!

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    Onward to the waterfalls and stream ....

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    Really, really nice. Original and great execution.

    I guess that it is too soon to evoke this part but you are going to desaturate the Stream color Inside the caves, aren't you ? I'd also desaturate the bushes a bit.

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    The stream and waterfall, and the sarcophagus.

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    Chick, this is fabulous. Who said you can't draw? Love the sarcophagus, seriously! And the scroll looks good too! And the water flowing that way, gorgeous. Well done!

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