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Thread: August 2014 Challenge: The Shelves of Arlath

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    You know what this needs? Some green areas. Some trees or parks on the shelves with no buildings, maybe a tree or two scattered elsewhere.

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    @Diamond - I totally agree. I had meant to drape some foliage on the hills and put some farms up on the upper shelves (one of the things they're used for). That stuff will be coming in the final image.
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    Added a bit o' green, some gardens and crops, trimmed the foam on the waterfalls a bit, and dropped the original image in there...

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    I like the waterfalls much better By the way where does the water from the top right falls go? No Candlestick Maker?

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    @chick - That little waterfall gets quickly very misty and then just runs down the side of that towering rock outcrop. And I did indeed put a Chandler in the town! I just didn't differentiate between a tallow chandler and a beeswax chandler. Moxillia Furlong does both!
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    Fantastic Map, I will be using this in one of my next games.

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