Western Torfani

[Diamond]

I love that! Combined with the color transition, I think it looks great.

[Warlin]

The texture of the land is interesting but it's a shame i have to zoom in to notice it. I love your swamp .
I can't wait to see the next improvements.

[Ilanthar]

Thanks everyone !

I've done some tests for roads and cities. The roads are unfinished, I'll add a slight shadowing I think, and the stones are representing a day travel. For cities, I've reworked my previous set, with a few more. I've decided to color the flags to show the country (red for Isadjan, green for Karandu...).
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Thoughts?

By Warlin
The texture of the land is interesting but it's a shame i have to zoom in to notice it.

Not sure to understand. Your talking about the crops lands? Too faint?

[Deadshade]

Everything is nicely consistent (was just joking about the pointy mountains earlier. But they are more pointy than average, no doubt about it )

One point has striken me in the eye.
You have very accurate, very black and strong lines everywhere.
One exception are the town icons. They have a very different linework, color and are fuzzy. For me it didn't fit in with the rest.

[Warlin]

Not sure to understand. Your talking about the crops lands? Too faint?

Yes, the land seem uniform when you watch all the map. But it's perhaps a mater of taste. For the city icons, i have the same problem when drawing them at a big size and reduce them at their map size...

[Ilanthar]

Thanks for the help. I agree about the city icons, I have redone those in the circle. Better?

@Warlin : I can increase the opacity of the crops (like below), but I'm not sure it's not too much present this way.
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[Deadshade]

Thanks for the help. I agree about the city icons, I have redone those in the circle. Better?

Oh yes. Like those in the circle much more.

[Ilanthar]

A small update with icons redone and a test for mines & sea roads. I really need to find something to indicate distances (both on lands & sea roads). It's crowded with the stones for land roads.
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[Ilanthar]

Some more cities/mines and a test to finish the land roads.
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Any suggestion about distances on sea/land roads?

[saria]

I really love the city icons, they fit so perfectly in there. I especially like the little dash of color on the flags - really well done.