Virasana Empire - Mandala Web Jumproute Map

[Brackhaus]

Hello everyone,

I have created this map as a personal reference for the Virasana Empire novel series my wife and I are writing.
It is a work in progress, and I would love to hear from the community how to improve on the design.

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Some of the goals for this map were:

• easy readability (ideally even in B/W , but definitely not there yet)
• easy to understand, useable as quick reference
• clear style that could hang in every classroom or spaceport, or maybe laminated in a spaceship's cockpit

Any feedback is welcome, and if you have any questions, please ask!

Thanks so much in advance,
Osiris

[3l3phant]

I really like it. Reminds me of the maps of the London Underground. Not sure if the intent will end up being to look like an actual hang-in-every-spaceport map or "just" for reference in the novel but if it's supposed to look like an official map then you might want to find a way to have some "government-speak" on it. Regardless, I think it looks awesome

[Brackhaus]

Thank you!
It did start as a mere reference, but it's becoming more. So yes, adding more government speak is a great idea.