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    Map Jan/Feb '18 Lite Challenge: The Whispering Path

    Oh hi!

    Couldn't sit this one out, so here is mine so far.

    And as always, I stared over the edge down far below and saw the rugged terrain down there and... threw myself off the deep end. Bamboo is hard to do!! Nevertheless, it worked out so far, yes?
    Please leave feedback, this is really a bit of an ambitious go at a map for me, so any help is greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy.


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    The bamboo trees definitely have a distinctive look. Kudos!
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    Yeah, the bamboo trees are unique, very cool. and the entrance is very interesting.
    Welcome to the Challenge Xcali

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    Wow those bamboo trees are amazing!

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    Quote Originally Posted by NoneTheWiser View Post
    The bamboo trees definitely have a distinctive look. Kudos!
    I'm glad it looks that way to you. Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    Yeah, the bamboo trees are unique, very cool. and the entrance is very interesting.
    Welcome to the Challenge Xcali
    Hehe, I was trying for something I haven't seen before. It was quite a process, the leaves being the most time-consuming part. But, I am quite happy so far with the result. Now the big challenge comes with figuring out what kind of extras needs to be added to a fantasy bamboo forest.

    Quote Originally Posted by Southern Crane View Post
    Wow those bamboo trees are amazing!
    Thank you. I appreciate it. They started out as a pencil and paper sketch before I scanned it and started playing around with brightness and contrast with multiply.

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    Helloooooo!

    Today I thought I'd draw some new assets and yeah, it came out quite interesting hehehe.
    Tell me what you think.

    Oh! I do want to know two things. One, the stone pillars at the BOTTOM, do you think I should keep them glowing or without the light? And two, do you think I should keep the yellow flowers and expand on them, or are the yellow flowers odd for this map?

    Hope you enjoy!

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    Bamboo trees are definitely a really big attraction - don't change them... unless of course you want to

    The flowers? Hmmmm... ok, they're ok, but I wouldn't cover the entire map in them, or it will look really far to dotty. Also keep them in patches

    Overall composition and colours are great

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mouse View Post
    Bamboo trees are definitely a really big attraction - don't change them... unless of course you want to

    The flowers? Hmmmm... ok, they're ok, but I wouldn't cover the entire map in them, or it will look really far to dotty. Also keep them in patches

    Overall composition and colours are great
    Thank you, Sue!
    Yeah, I don't plan on changing the bamboo trees. Maybe small tweaks here and there.

    The flowers is an odd challenge, on one hand I like them, on the other I can probably better them. But I won't add much more than there already is, so it's no worry.

    I'm really glad you like my composition and colours so far

    The only thing I dread for the map is the labeling phase. As usual.

    Anyway! Thanks and have a lovely evening.

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    I like the glowing pillars and the stonehenge rocks. I think the flowers are a little to bright and take the eye away from the map. Maybe keep the flowers but tone them down a little.

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    Hi!

    Okay, I got carried away and shaded the ground quite a bit to get ridges to pop out and stuff. Also, I added the overgrown rock tooth. Hopefully, it works.

    Then, I increased the intensity of the glowing in the rock pillars at the bottom. And toned down my flowers to a soft purple. Changed the weird circle structure's color too. Oh! I added a light effect in the maw of the map's mysterious entrance.

    So, basically quite a few changes. Let me know if I broke something.

    P.S. *Highfive* for Mouse for giving me an amazing tip some while back.

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    ~The heavens declare the glory of God;
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    Day after day they pour forth speech;
    night after night they reveal knowledge.
    ~ Psalm 19

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