Wow! It looks stunning for a hand-made map. Congratulations! And to think that it's just 7 x 7 is mind-blowing. You have a great future ahead.
A few comments:
- The colors look great. A bit too saturated for a map in my opinion, but visually pleasing nonetheless (excepting that small purple blob, maybe
).
- I commend you for doing it by hand entirely, including the labels. I think that handwritten labels add a lot of charm to a map. That being said, what you can do in order to improve the lettering is to find a font that you like and try to mimic that. Especially on the larger labels, like Maslira, you want the thick / thin strokes to be consistent. As a general rule, upstrokes should be thin and downstrokes should be thick (for example, the A should be the other way around - thin when it goes up and think when it goes down).
- You can try to lose the border between the colors (but keep the sharp edge - don't smooth it out - I think it looks cool).
- In order to make the labels more readable, you could try to write them first, and then add the colors around them, maybe using a lighter shade underneath the text. Or, as an alternative, apply the color first, then find a way to lighten the colors where you are going to put the labels by using a white pencil or something like that.
Anyway, great job so far! Looking forward to the full map.