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    Map Ashtalon World Map

    Here's the final version of The Fantastic Realm of Ashtalon, a private commission.

    It's my first crack at doing straight black & white. I hope to continue to improve; all feedback welcome.

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    I realized I should have put this in the Finished Maps section. Can someone point me to who I need to contact to get it moved?
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    Moved the thread for you.

    Map looks great!
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    Thanks Chickpea!
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    This is great, your black and white elements are working really well, I mean, it doesn't feel like it's missing colour, it feels complete

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    Not bad at all! Keep it up!

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    I like the map a LOT! It's certainly gorgeous in its simplicity. The only thing I kinda miss is a way to tell the water apart from the landmass in once simple glance. A darker shade of grey in the background, or maybe some horizontal hashing along the shoreline would have helped lead my eye along.

    Also, due to a lack of shading that gorge west of Vayga's home seems somewhat weird to me, but I'm sure that's just my weird brain.

    But that's just a nitpick - overall I think the map works wonderfully!
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    Very nice map, clean and legible ! Well done !

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