First map ever

[colorful_camel]

Hello, I just introduced myself earlier but want to share a map I just made.

Perhaps looking for feedback if anyone is kind enough to do that.

This was the first map (1):
hydanpool.jpg

Then this came up since I had a blank page next to the firs map (2):
hydanpool_large.jpg

And this is a zoom of the second one (3):
hydanpool_large_zoom.jpg

So, you might see in (1) that I made some massive piers, but I decided it is fine and those will have people and commercial activity in them. Making them basically neighborhoods. And In (2) there is an even larger pier, so at this point I guess that is going to be some kind of pier town.

In terms of technique, I was pretty limited by an A5 scketchbook and since I am not a particularly skilled artist that is what I ended up drawing. In (2) I intended to just see the main buildings of each place, for which I still have not a real story.

Thanks in advance in case of some feedback, and also for this amazing community.

[Gamerprinter]

Welcome! Nice first map. I've seen a lot worse first maps - these are very nice You ought to repost this in the Finished Maps Forum, under the Gallery section of the site.

GP

[Diamond]

I'll move your post to Finished Maps, camel.

[Ilanthar]

Welcome! Nice maps, especially for a first try.