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    Guild Journeyer Matthew VE's Avatar
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    Here's a very quick bookmark I did. It took about half an hour. As always comments and critiques are welcome!

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    I would suggest giving the lake on the side a bit more breathing space. The way it is laid out now, you're running into the frame in a way that looks accidental, rather than planned.

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    Very nice job on the mountain outlines, would love to see this with some colour.

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    Nice work, Matthew. Your mountains look great. I'd also like to see this with a bit of colour.
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    Thanks everyone! I would like to do colour eventually.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lukc View Post
    I would suggest giving the lake on the side a bit more breathing space. The way it is laid out now, you're running into the frame in a way that looks accidental, rather than planned.
    Thanks Lukc! If I get around to working on this again I will make sure to fix this. The map was so rushed that I didn't even notice.

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    i like the idea with the text it make it special. great work.

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    I really like those mountains. I'd second what LuKc said about the lake and I'd tapper a little bit that river.

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