The Kingdom of Turcosst

[Redleg]

I drew this while at work today and decided to scan it in and overlay a parchment effect on it. Any thoughts or criticisms would be greatly appreciated.
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[kacey]

Nice work Redleg, I really like you're coast line, I think it's my favourite part. Could I suggest doing some shading, or hatching in you're mountains, they look a little unfinished to me. I also think this would benefit from darkening the lines a touch so we can see them better, I'm finding them a bit foggy, but then maybe it's just a result of scanning it in. The map looks good, and it's nice to see another hand drawn map on the forum, not every one pulls it off as nicely as you've done here.

[CasketJones]

I like your style of drawing, if only I could draw half as good

[Mouse]

It's really very good, Redleg. I only have one problem with it, and that's the blurry nature of the parchment texture you have used. With a better texture the beauty of the linework would shine out a lot better

[Straf]

I like the way this is drawn, very simple and clear.