Finished map enjoy. Feed back always welcome.

[Daniel James]

Compleate elements Bright small for email.jpg

The big magic storm in the middle was added per request of Patron

[johnvanvliet]

the storm looks like Saturn's NorthPole storm
http://www.ciclops.org/view/7620/North-Polar-Movie

[Bogie]

Cool map. Nice colors. The north-south passage is an interesting feature.

[Larb]

Yes I think it looks great. I think the national boundaries might be clearer in yellow or red, possibly dashed.

[Ilanthar]

Very nice work with great colors! I second Larb about boundaries and would probably use a "less button" style for the cities. I really like the general land shape.

[arsheesh]

Nice job on this Daniel! The colors are very vibrant. One recommendation would be to tone down the contrast on the texture of your background parchment layer; it's a little bit busy. Also, borderlines might help to embellish the map a bit. Nice work though.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[TheRedEpic]

That world cyclone looks terrifying Great first map, you have alot of talent! I also second Arsheesh's comment!

[fabio p]

A good map, in my opinion, but when I first saw it I mistook the national boundaries for rivers and was going to call the river police. So I agree with Larb's comment.
If you didn't purposely choose an oil painting style for you map, you should also follow Arsheesh's good advice.