WIP Island Kingdom of Zara

[Skyeshard]

Hey peoples! So This is my 3rd map in this mand-drawn style. I decided to do my mountains in a different style to check it out. I know that I should scan this and label cities, regions, lakes, etc, digitally. This is why not everything is labeled. I do want some feedback on the landscape though. Zara is meant to be more mountainous are rivery than my previous maps. I'm still learning geology and terrain so I'm not sure if I'm asking for the river police or not. What's your feedback?

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[Rush Wingate]

I like it! I particularly like the island shape, its nice and robust.
My ONLY critique so far, is that in the lower center portion, there is an area you called "KLANS"? You may wish to give thought about spelling that with a K, as that MAY bring an unpleasant image for some folks.
Other than that, I cant wait to see this develop!

[Skyeshard]

Haha, I see your point. That city was originally called "Klansfell", however on this map I didn't have the room to write it all, so I just shortened the name. I never even thought about it beyond that. I'll probably change it to something different, or just spell it with a C instead.

[Skyeshard]

Here's an update. Added ocean lines and finished naming everywhere. Still wanting some advice on rivers.

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